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Hi all.

This week we have focused on fixing our papers. This was challenging as I find it hard write academically. I am glad to get the chance to improve my writing. For this week I have rewritten my introduction and conclusion as I believe they weren't good. I also fixed up my paragraphs where I found mistakes. 

I am pretty happy with how it is at this moment and I am happy to continue on with my weekly tasks after Easter break. I hope everyone will enjoy this break as we all need it.

Thank you,

Denis.
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  1. Andy AlsafiMarch 30, 2021 at 2:18 PM

    Hi Denis,
    Its good to see that you went over and redid your intro and conclusion, not many people would go through that effort all over again...
    It is good to see that you managed to recognise that your work was not up to standard or at least up to your full potential, I admire that sense of self improvement.
    You are right easter is definitely needed... Even though we are still going to be drowning in work... Summer is what I am looking forward to and I am sure you are as well..
    Keep up your good work and enjoy your easter.
    Andy

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